WELCOME TO THE OFFICIAL WEBSITE OF URBAN BOOKS, AUTHORS, & WRITERS OF AMERICA!
  • Home
    • About Us >
      • Who's Who
      • Black Lives Matter Submission Form
      • UBAWA Documentary
      • History/Founder
    • Writer's Retreat
    • Welcome HOME!
  • Book Convention
    • DC
    • Chicago
    • New York
    • Los Angeles
    • 2016 UBAWA Book Fair Registration
    • 2015
    • 2013
    • Performing Act Signup Form
    • Volunteer Signup Form
  • Awards
    • Nominations Feature
    • Top 100 Authors of 2024
    • Top 100 Authors of 2023
    • Top 100 Authors of 2022
    • Top 100 Authors of 2021
    • Top 100 Authors of 2020
    • Top 100 Authors of 2019
    • Top 100 Authors of 2018
    • Top 100 Authors of 2017
    • Top 100 Authors of 2016
  • News
    • Past News
    • Submit an Article >
      • Feature ME
    • UBAWA News >
      • America's Next Bestseller
      • Adult Summer Reading Program
  • All Things UBAWA
    • Features >
      • Behind the Pen
      • Radio Interviews
      • Directory
      • Bestseller
      • Book Club List >
        • Book Club List Archive
      • Magazine Feature
      • Book Review Submission Form
      • Rate My Cover
      • Books without Boundaries Submission Form
      • New Author Feature
      • Non-Fiction Books Feature
      • Men of Color
      • Women of Color
      • Book Release & Birthday Calendar
      • Get Promoted >
        • Books on BLAST
      • Touching Our Youth
    • Jobs
    • Subscribe
    • Magazine
    • Author of the Week
    • UBAWA Contests >
      • Best Book Cover
      • Short Story Contest
    • Scholarships
    • Testimonials
    • Coach Me to Publish
    • Resources 4 Authors
    • Author Collaborations
    • AuthorsTALK
  • Contact
    • Magazine Order
    • Make a Donation
    • Valued Members >
      • Premium Members
    • Services >
      • Bookstore Placement App
      • Services Request Form
      • Events
      • Become an Author Mentor
      • Free Services >
        • Rate My Publisher
    • UBAWA Store
    • FAQ

NEW BOOK REVIEW: Beautiful Seduction

8/27/2013

0 Comments

 
Picture
Number of Pages: 300

Rating: 3

Who would you recommend this book to?
Adults ages 21-45

What did you like most about this book?
The novel had several messages that dealt with serious relational issues such as domestic abuse and cheating which I liked. Domestic abuse was really showcased with Malcolm and Trina and went deep into showing how easy it was to get caught up in that situation. With the characters, Shireece and Sean, I appreciated the fact that the novel delved deep into marital issues concerning communication or the lack thereof and testing the strengths and the wills of the holy union. The author added another element with straying from religious beliefs and how that also impacts daily living and marital decisions. Most of all, I loved the triumphs of the story showcasing how good relationships between partners can help heal even the most vile past experiences with the characters Qu and Tierra. The individual characters were well developed, as each one had their own personality and were very distinct in dialogue and narrative.

What did you like least about this book?
While the book touched on a plethora of several issues the execution of the plot was not good. In certain less important areas, the book dragged longer than necessary and in areas that were highly climatic they often felt rushed as if the author was trying to hurry and get through it. The book was also very poorly edited. There were several instances of simple errors such as a huge amount of misspellings. It almost appeared as if it was typed with an auto-correct feature that kept changing words such as "so" to "do" and things such as that nature. There were also crucial errors with incorrect character names even in one area having the author's name in the story instead of the character. The formatting was very poor where it would end at half a page but still be in the middle of a chapter and phrases were capitalized in unnecessary areas to show emotion. I also did not like Qu's full character name of Aquarian Skeene. It did not flow well and it takes longer to figure out how to pronounce as you read. 

Any suggestions for how this book could have been better?
First, I would definitely suggest the author to use spell check and to get a highly qualified editor. I would also recommend that the author practice on plot development and execution, in particular, learning areas where it is okay to be brief and to the point and when the story should extend to keep the reader engaged in the moment. This will also help make some of the more climatic areas more believable. 

What was your overall impression of this book?
Overall, the book is just okay. It doesn't hold interest long because the insignificant parts really do drag entirely too long. I had to re-read sentences several times due to the gross amount of errors. The book is not one that I would re-read again unless it was better executed and edited at least for the misspellings. I really believe this book had a lot of potential simply based of the concept and the storyline. If it had been executed better this truly could have been a dynamic read. It was also highly predictable to be listed as a mystery. 

Reviewed by: Kreceda Tyler




0 Comments



Leave a Reply.

    Become a Member. It's FREE!

    Become a member by clicking here.

    Archives

    December 2024
    September 2024
    May 2024
    January 2024
    December 2023
    January 2023
    December 2022
    February 2022
    January 2022
    December 2021
    September 2021
    February 2021
    December 2020
    November 2020
    September 2020
    August 2020
    July 2020
    June 2020
    February 2020
    December 2019
    November 2019
    September 2019
    August 2019
    July 2019
    May 2019
    April 2019
    March 2019
    February 2019
    January 2019
    December 2018
    October 2018
    August 2018
    July 2018
    December 2017
    November 2017
    October 2017
    September 2017
    August 2017
    July 2017
    June 2017
    May 2017
    April 2017
    March 2017
    February 2017
    January 2017
    December 2016
    November 2016
    October 2016
    September 2016
    August 2016
    July 2016
    June 2016
    May 2016
    April 2016
    January 2016
    December 2015
    November 2015
    October 2015
    September 2015
    August 2015
    July 2015
    June 2015
    February 2015
    October 2014
    September 2014
    July 2014
    May 2014
    February 2014
    December 2013
    November 2013
    October 2013
    September 2013
    August 2013
    June 2013
    May 2013
    April 2013
    March 2013
    February 2013
    January 2013
    November 2012
    October 2012
    December 2011
    June 2011
    April 2011

    Categories

    All
    90 Second Reads
    99 Cent Ebooks
    Activity Points
    Atlanta Authors
    Authors Over 30
    Author Tips
    Black Male Authors
    Book Fair
    Book Reviews
    Books On Blast
    Books Without Boundaries
    Dream Pathways Kids Read
    Events
    Featured Authors
    Free Author Promotion
    Free Book
    Free Book Promo
    Free Book Reviews
    Headline News
    Internship/Volunteer Opportunities
    Life As A Poet
    Marketing & Promotion
    Neffe Book Signing
    New Author Feature
    New Releases
    News
    Non Fiction Books For You
    Non-Fiction Books For You
    Quick Reads
    Self Publishing
    Self-Publishing
    Something About That Author
    Ubawa Book Fair
    Ubawa Literary Awards
    Women Of Color
    Writing Tips

    RSS Feed

Copyright 2010-2025 Urban Books Authors & Writers of America All Rights Reserved


​UBAWA Testimonials

Picture
"Thank you Ubawa's Bestsellers for the endless opportunities you provide for authors like myself. It is much appreciated." -Morenike' Matoy, author of ‘A Taste of Insanity’

Picture
"UBAWA helps support people’s dreams. They are positive in every way imaginable. UBAWA offers advice and services that are beneficial to every writer no matter what stage they are in their careers. Their site is a godsend." --Ben Burgess, author of ‘Monster’
Picture
"I just want to send a special thanks to UBAWA. It means a lot to me to have your support and assistance as an author. Y'all didn't know me from a can of paint yet you were willing to create awareness about me and my book. So I just want to say thanks so much!" --Kennedee Devoe, ‘Two Wrongs Don’t Make a Right…it Makes Us Even’

Picture
"Your support of independent authors is amazing. Thank you for your time and assistance with all that you do." --Ronnie C. Dawson, author of ‘Irreconcilable Differences’

Picture
"I think what you do for writers is amazing! I love it." --DeVaughn Lilly, author of ‘The Magnificent Life of Gravy Brown’

  • Home
    • About Us >
      • Who's Who
      • Black Lives Matter Submission Form
      • UBAWA Documentary
      • History/Founder
    • Writer's Retreat
    • Welcome HOME!
  • Book Convention
    • DC
    • Chicago
    • New York
    • Los Angeles
    • 2016 UBAWA Book Fair Registration
    • 2015
    • 2013
    • Performing Act Signup Form
    • Volunteer Signup Form
  • Awards
    • Nominations Feature
    • Top 100 Authors of 2024
    • Top 100 Authors of 2023
    • Top 100 Authors of 2022
    • Top 100 Authors of 2021
    • Top 100 Authors of 2020
    • Top 100 Authors of 2019
    • Top 100 Authors of 2018
    • Top 100 Authors of 2017
    • Top 100 Authors of 2016
  • News
    • Past News
    • Submit an Article >
      • Feature ME
    • UBAWA News >
      • America's Next Bestseller
      • Adult Summer Reading Program
  • All Things UBAWA
    • Features >
      • Behind the Pen
      • Radio Interviews
      • Directory
      • Bestseller
      • Book Club List >
        • Book Club List Archive
      • Magazine Feature
      • Book Review Submission Form
      • Rate My Cover
      • Books without Boundaries Submission Form
      • New Author Feature
      • Non-Fiction Books Feature
      • Men of Color
      • Women of Color
      • Book Release & Birthday Calendar
      • Get Promoted >
        • Books on BLAST
      • Touching Our Youth
    • Jobs
    • Subscribe
    • Magazine
    • Author of the Week
    • UBAWA Contests >
      • Best Book Cover
      • Short Story Contest
    • Scholarships
    • Testimonials
    • Coach Me to Publish
    • Resources 4 Authors
    • Author Collaborations
    • AuthorsTALK
  • Contact
    • Magazine Order
    • Make a Donation
    • Valued Members >
      • Premium Members
    • Services >
      • Bookstore Placement App
      • Services Request Form
      • Events
      • Become an Author Mentor
      • Free Services >
        • Rate My Publisher
    • UBAWA Store
    • FAQ